Rosa was playing three-legged soccer without a partner she was the odd one out. She was competing against Kenya. As she was playing she tripped over someone and hurt her sore on her knee. She was sore but also mad at that boy named Richard who bumped her off.
Rosa was crying and some of her friends came to help . They helped her up and took her to the sick bay. They had a quick look at her sore and put cream on it and a placed a plaster on top of her sore then gave her a lollipop.
She was happy and went back to play carefully on the next game.
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