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Thursday, May 5, 2011

My Exotic Holidays

After a tiring term at school, it was finally the school holidays. I was so excited so I jogged half way home, then there right in front of my baggy eyes my aunt’s car zooming by. I was to sore to run so I walked fast all the way home and as soon as I got to the fence I heard someone say my name in a weird way and laughing. When I got inside I was so amazed. I saw my oldest cousin Jerome and his younger brother Noah. It’s been a while since I last saw them.

I went all crazy and over board, excited. We all were happy to see each other. We went to the park, Pools and Skating! It was such a day for me because it was amazing. We waited a bit for the sun to go down and when the Sun was gone we walked home all lazy and full of joy. Jerome, Noah and I went to our cold but also warm beds, then we started to tell ghost stories. My story was a hit because it was quite funny and silly. It was when you go to an ugly house and a ghost will come with nails in a plastic bag and hit you on your small head.
It was not long till we were asleep. I had a dream, it was about me flying then I could not I was falling, there was water but it was ice, I was yelling out “HELP I’M FALLING IN TO ICE!” I got up in the morning Noah and Jerome were playing my game and I was still tired but when I started to play I was wide awake.

When it just went on 8:00am someone came knocking on the door. We were wondering who would be at the door at this time. When Noah opened the door it was his cousin from his mothers side. His cousin’s name is Prince or Piriniha, he comes to my school. I was so surprised that it was his cousin because I’ve known Prince since we were around 4 or 5 years old. Jerome was so angry because he knew Prince’s step brother, he was the one who gave Jerome's brother Christan the bash. Noah did not know what his grumpy brother was talking about! Noah and I didn't care about that we just wanted to play a rough game of our favorite sport rugby. It was me against Noah and Piriniha. Noah had the ball and then he ran like a cheetah, but I tackled him as if I were a mad rhino, then when he fell the ball was still in his hands and then he scored. It was not long till my Mother and Uncle got up they still looked so tired like a sloth.

I was really sore after a long game of rugby. It was not long till it started to rain like a meteor shower except with little rocks. Prince went back home and I went inside my house. I was playing on my awesome white PSP that stands for Playstation Portable. It was not long till my Aunty Api came to pick up Jerome and Noah. I was moaning and groaning then I had an idea I ran as fast as I could outside. Before they could go I asked if I could sleep over for a day, Api said “go ask your Mum” and I went to tell my Mum if I could sleep over at Api’s place and she said “no” so I went and sulked in bed.

1 comments:

tevita to'a said...

Hi Kevin I like what you did with the story It is really creativity and excitement.

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