Stomach Churning...

Sean went to Rainbow End and the first thing
he saw was a rollercoaster.There was a man standing taking tickets for people to get on the ride.

He asked the man if he was allowed to go on and have a cool ride around the loop. He said “Sorry no little kids allowed you need an adult or someone over sixteen with you sorry”
Sean ran to his mother and she was busy so he asked his brother.

His brother said “yep!” and they went on Sean was happy until it went super fast and he was shaking after he got on. His brother laughed and said “What a big ride hey little bro.” He didn’t feel good he went to the toilet and boom diarrhea.

Broke Family

There was a family who was poor and had little money or no money at all, they were one of the poorest people in their country.

The Fom family lived in England, London, their poorness start 23 years ago when they lost their company.They made products known as Fresh which were pies. John Fom got a job but they only got $2 dollars per day but it wasn’t enough to pay the bills they would soon have to live on the streets.

It wasn’t long until Feng the third oldest found a diamond on the road and reported it to the police and he got a reward of one million dollars. It was a check and soon they were famous because it was in the newspaper and they paid their overdue bills and was happy.

They were happy and also got a flash new job for the Queen. They met new people and soon got themselves a new company and Feng Fom was the boss and soon it was the best company.

Roller Coaster Fun

Sean went to Rainbow End and the first thing
he saw was a roller coaster.There was a man standing taking tickets for people to get on the ride.


He asked the man if he was allowed to go on and have a cool ride around the loop. He said “Sorry no little kids allowed you need an adult or someone over sixteen with you sorry”
Sean ran to his mother and she was busy so he asked his brother.

His brother said “yep!” and they went on Sean was happy until it went super fast and he was shaking after he got on. His brother laughed and said “What a big ride hey little bro.” He didn’t feel good he went to the toilet and BOOM! diarrhea.


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School Olympic Games

A girl named Rosa was at a School Olympic Games and one of the games she participated in a game called three-legged soccer and something happened.

Rosa was playing three-legged soccer without a partner she was the odd one out. She was competing against Kenya. As she was playing she tripped over someone and hurt her sore on her knee. She was sore but also mad at that boy named Richard who bumped her off.

Rosa was crying and some of her friends came to help . They helped her up and took her to the sick bay. They had a quick look at her sore and put cream on it and a placed a plaster on top of her sore then gave her a lollipop.

She was happy and went back to play carefully on the next game.

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Skyrim: The Ultimate Show Down

In the ages before record time was a land of unimaginable creatures, dragons ruled the land enslaving all races like nords,imperials,argonians,elves and a powerful feline race. There was one who withstand their power and his name was Dovahkiin -Dragonborn, he was the mightiest of the dragon slayers and he stole their powers and used it against them.

200 years after the Oblivion Crisis in the 4E001 the Dragonborn was found at Helgen. He looked up and saw the sky turn red with flaming rocks falling then a dragon came and destroyed the the village down to the ground. He went to the Jarl of Whiterun to send defense to the nearest village called Riverwood. In the sky there was a voice that said “Dovahkiin”. 

One of the guards told him that the ‘Greybeards’ summoned him to the Throat of The World, it was a mountain that merely touched the sky.He ran up the mountain to meet these ‘ Greybeards’. When he got there an old monastery was there. He walked in and he was welcomed. They taught him the power of the voice which the dragons used against the races.He killed dragons using the voice and his blade, but he found a powerful dragon who knew where the chief of the dragons were so the dragon took him there. 

There was 3 dragons waiting above a sacred temple. He slaughtered or those who stood before him and found a portal to another realm where the dead lived in peace.He found the dragon known as Alduin who was also the oldest of them all. The Dragonborn died fighting the dragon but Alduin died too but his soul was launched into time and space while the Dragonborns body turn to dust and was ashes protecting the land of faith.

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Dangers of Smoking

The dangers of smoking include diseases that affect the lungs heart and the brain. In my argument I’ll be talking about dangers of smoking and the likelihood of catching a disease from secondhand smoking.

One of the diseases of smoking is lung cancer such as emphysema,bronchitis and also chronic air obstruction. It damages or blocks the airways and your alveoli (They are parts of your lungs to help you breath) as well. Smoking is hard on the heart because of heart disease. The fact is that the tobacco causes disability or even death. 75% of smokers in the world die from heart and lung disease which air to your lungs would be blocked and your heart would stop. Some of cancers from smoking is kidney cancer, stomach cancer, or even bladder cancer.

There are unpleasant consequences for second hand smoking. Environmental tobacco smoke (secondhand smoke) is smoke that comes from someone breathing out or exhaled out of their nose or mouth. It is mostly dangerous to children and could catch those disease that I’ve shown you above. Their lungs are likely to stop or reduce growth to the lungs making them hard to breath or get asthma. The likelihood of a child to get a disease who is exposed to secondhand smoking from a parent is high. 90% of children are around their parents when they are smoking.

I’ve shown you what the effects of smoking and what could happen to your child through secondhand smoking.

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Grief And Sorrow

Here Lies Kevin Isaacsalesio Kasipale

(Jokes)

Grief or sorrow could be caused when someone dies. Intense sorrow could be caused when a person dies unexpectedly and a family member didn’t know until they are told that's when they are caused with great sorrow.

What is this grief? Grief is an emotion or a feeling which is deep sorrow, esp. thats caused by someone’s death. Grief has to do with anyone's death.

Here is an example of how grief made three family’s sad. In Afghanistan three soldiers were killed by an I.E.D (Improvised Explosion Device). Their parents didn’t know but they were soon told and they would've been filled with grief and deep sorrow. Their deaths were unexpected because they didn’t know that would happen.

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